Actually I like the scene better now than before so I can almost accept the usual mistakes.

VegasRich “….I’m about to cum. Oh yeah”. Pull out and jerks for two minutes before cumming…” Yeah it’s so the norm it doesn’t even faze me. But yeah Patrick Dunne could of worked Ryan Stack much better than he did. Including Ryan Stack’s dick particularity up Patrick Dunne’s ass. It was like Patrick Dunne hasn’t been right proper fucked in the ass before off camera and the director should of shot the scene accordingly to the bottoms Patrick’s ability.

This is why you never get too excited over previews, especially from staged shots like RB’s. I completely agree with the point about then end. A bad ending can be enough to ruin even a hot scene.

Thanks for the critique. Passion didn’t exactly jump out from the pics and does look tentative. These guys look really good together, but that alone can’t make for a good scene.